Ahhh. . it was sort of whack. You was off-beat badly. Missed the snare every 2 bars. I mean I write without the beat sometimes too. . but it doesn't take but a couple minutes to fix it to fit. That is no excuse. Delivery could use work but it seemed delivery and emotion was your best suit. Lyrics were average. A lot of filler and some played shit.

I expected better. . . blah.

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R.I.P.- Epimetheus
Robert L. Rem
1986-2003