http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82736

This raptures perfect. .
Your beauties More Than skin deep, & i scratched the surface
Yet, im mad nervous. .
Stuck for words when we speak, so i retreat an Act Worthless.
Longing for Her Kiss. .
^^^^^^^^dope intro start, caught my attention, well flowed,
and creative, nice intro style, kinda gripping.........
...........


"Maybe i Shouldnt Have been so reluctant to let u notice things,
And shared with you my every thought, my hopes and dreams" what
happned cam, it seemed like you are going for that line for line
rhyme structure, i prefer the abstractness

Cam u had a nice starter to your verse, ender was alrite,
meanwhile.....whats up with your style?! looks kinda simple
and well not very complex, i mean people might like that
but i just bah i prefer the abstractness u know what i mean,
meanwhiel...flow was suprisingly good maybe cause u kept
the whole thing sorta simple, nice creative and imaganative.
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[ Baby Brazy ]

"Hearin your words makes me smile, it clears my sadness inside
But we cant risk our friendship and have our madness collide"
gripping starting..........................
"Yet put the bad things aside, just let me open up my mind
Im searchin for a soulmate & your the best that I could find"
its good that u 2 are complimenting each other's styles...
and like your both just writing from eachother's
own perspectives that is d-ope. "because were still
tighter then ever If your askin when we'll be a team tho,
sorry the answers never" ha dope ender.......
meanwhile...brazy's flow was better, but not like cam
had no flow, brazy u were creative as hell as well
liked your ender nice twist, muhahah cam got rejected lmao

mean while u 2 did good, nice imaginary/creativity,
kinda simple, but i guess not all topics can be done
on an abstract level, flowed good, complimented each
other's styles,.................................


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