Nice Drop

The rhymes were good, and the flow was aight off at times like real said. The vocab was good.

The best part i liked the most was...

"We're already cattled headed to a slaughter,
Why bother, i wont live devoting to one "father",
its pathetic, im poetic, and express feelings thru letters."

I thought that was the best part this poem, anyway good drop for your first...

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