my little princess of incest i must decline respectfully
understand i regret my lack of desire especially sexually
i fail to recognize why you seem to be obssessing see
when we both know my situation both abroad and domestically
yet you press against me even as i draw back in revulsion
my horror is apparent but you play unaware of my emotion
as if afflicted by some evil spell of unforseen devotion
LOOK i said NO! hard to believe we shared a former relationship
when right now you are eating away at my infinite patience bitch

~very nice all the way through here...great rhyme
scheme before I think you slowed down for a minute..
great lines homie for a great song...could definately
outshine any guest on this...~

youll get the best of her when your on...and shell
realize her mistakes and wish she could turn time
back wishin you were in her place...cause youll be
on someday rhyming like this here....

the rest besides the section I quoted was good as
well just slowed down a tad.....your still gassin em
though....well done....smart idea of doing things like
this because most people wouldnt read it all..
definately the makings of a worth hearing song...

girls..they gotta union....
well never know how they think....
I wouldnt want to ever know....
I would like to look and see if the light
bulbs on though...they flicker every now and then...

this was good shit..thats all im trying to say...
if anyone cant relate they're stupid....

please lemme know what u think of mi song...

la paz