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Old 10-01-03, 05:42 AM   #2
DiverseSyndicate
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this was an ill piece, wordplay was ill,vocab was tight, rhyme scheme and structure were tight, tha only thing is i didnt like tha way you ended it, i thought you couldve ended it better, other than that this was a tight drop,keep droppin tha hotness.~1~
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