Rejoice angel,many awaited your arrival to
rework the angles.
Fallen wingman takes on many forms but the
strong cant mental strangle

Scream phoenix,once the chains are broken you shall
Expand your wingtips.
Emotion sickness might set in but with perscriptions it
Can be extinguished

first of all i am glad you made this into a full length song i thought it was dope but couldn't say so due to the tourney. the two lines above are ill because they teeter on the edge of spirituality without actually going there. what you end up with is a rebirth of self type piece.


Your an oak tree be cautious of your branches
Making more friends,
Steel structures cant be broken down by
Hands of porcelin.

open micers probably wouldn't recognize this ill use of multi's without the highlighting and effect. i like how you make the words fit what you are trying to say, rather than conforming to preconcieved ideas of rhyming. makes your entire style stick out like a well shined penny.

This is heavenly con muthafuckin flows confusing complex,
Real lyricists dont make it to my candid camera birds eye,
All lyrics are poetry dont ever take this emcee for grant,
Like Guru said ill leave you right where you stand

this is just plain raw i most enjoyed how you managed to work the shortened version of your name in there. made me go DAAAYUUUMM. the entire piece was awesome but this put it over the top.

Life is a game it goes on and people change
Under the layers through trials and trivulations
Situations placed in, for better or worse whatever
Is first jumpstarts a daily path its never a curse
Its full circle.

what i liked about the chorus was it was catchy but it didn't fail to fufill its role which is sum up the piece...........you stuck it because it didn't say to much or too little.......your illness humbles me......i am not at all surprised at how well this turned out........tic is the shit look how much talent we have just between the two of us.......don't let them doubt you homie keep killing'em with words


respect...