damn that was a real nice, deep piece....and i feel where ya coming from...i'm goin through something similar myself...anyways everything was on point, flow, wordplay, structure, vocab...it really got the point across...nothing bad to say....i was really feeling it....

also if you ever get a chance could you go over my latest open mic and leave me some feedback or something....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81640