OOMPA FREEPOST^^
Nice piece man,.....good imagery , ...and u used a nice vocab aswell, ...everything flowed niceley,.....and yea i think i was feelin it kinda, ...overall a 8/10 ....and props
and i was feelin ur concept, nice picked
...like these lines
where hoards of lumbering law breakers inflict earthen scars
tall orders are carved butchering Amazonia with stumped trademarks