I call you fake cause you’d have blisters if you were really holden heat
so when I make your career …..fall~down…. im just dropping some shit
Life was a bitch, I wanted to get with
^haha good stuff..stood out

again filled with some nice lines
word play and humour seem to be your speciality
wasnt feeling the first third of this verse in all honesty
seemed to lack content
after that it picked up alot and finished up well...however ive read alot of your pieces and maybe its just me but u seem to be in a bit of a rut writing wise..the content isnt always as interseting as it used to be...just my thoughts man
peace