Cam this was really tight...Your imagery was amazing...You managed too capture your thoughts and you write em...The style was enticing...Everything seemed there, sorry i can't give advice but i just thought this was AMAZING

But i know you hate hype...so

Baby Brazy, Your verse was good wiht a solid rhyme scheme but maybe you could of incorporated some multis in...But the content and what you wanted to say was there...So props

Holla at mine and G.Hods...Observation

Pz