HOLY CRAP

out of teh 3 years ove been reading net poetry i neva seen a poem written like this lmao

the christmas tree thing drug me in and i had to continure reading cuz i wanted to kno what the hell you were writing about lmao

holy jeesus this was weird


Brake off and gas to the floor as the rail car shoots me down the track,
^ prolly my fave line cuz it gives us a sense of teh building adrenilane

wow this was a very intresting peice ...honestly i never read anything along this line before im kinda impressed with your creativity


please peep myne if you have time

hazy