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IP:
Pretty one sided here in my opinion.
Liba came with the bulk, no doubt.
More bullets mean more hits, right?
Hmmm...
No.
Liba's format and rhyme scheme were just disasterous.
Sorry, don't wanna beef, but you need to discover flow.
And wordplay. Didn't see a stitch of it in the verse.
You took multi's, no doubt.
And effort, if that was a catagory.
But shorten ya lines...(did I actually just say that?)
Punches: Carson
Flow: Carson
Wordplay: Carson
Complexity: Carson
Multi's: Liba
There ya go.
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