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Originally posted by Magnificent
Prolly i lot of you gonna hate on me cause it seems the most of worship ghod....
but are you a poet or a rapper?
i bet you're both. and that's cool but then be both cause im checkin on too many lines that do make sense for a rapper....
all this stuff has to "sound" good. And sooo much of it does like i really enjoyed the lines with targeting and marketing(choice)
On the other hand... what's with "I'd enter Tainment" that doesn't make sense spoken aloud. Besides, how does a hit surface abusively? Maybe hits surface so when rapper needs to rhyme with musically...
im not tellin im just sayin...peace and good work
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Agreed, it does sound awkward; however, there is substance behind the line . This whole piece revolves around the indignation I harbor towards blasé, culture-saturated entertainment . When I say that the hits "surface abusively," I mean to dictate the fact that these songs (hits) that we hear daily are corroding our minds - filling up space that could be used for better purposes (abusively). I
was skeptical about the wording, and I'm happy you brought it up. .
As for "entering Tainment," it's basic wordplay - I am sure you realize that . I wanted to offer at least
one piece of wordplay to our collaboration . As I "enter Tainment," I enter the culture-saturate world of mainstream entertainment. Thankss for the replies, folks.