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Old 10-01-03, 04:17 PM   #7
Born To Kill
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This was an ok little piece.

You can tell it's freestyle.

Pretty good, but kinda basic.

Nothing outstanding in the way of wordplay or complexity.

But the comraderie, the closeness on and off the court comes across.

Pretty sure that's what you were going for with this.

Keep up the drops, Slik.

Peep this for me, it's a bit longer than yours, but I'd like ya feedback.

Thanks...

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