iight

i agree with Hazy, never have i ever seen something written like that, its really different, and unique, but the biggest part i like about it is, there isnt someone dying, no one greiving, just a happy go piece about everyday life ( well for some ppl ) not saying that the sad pieces are bad just its nice to read a piece every now and then that doesnt grab a hold of your heart and twist it. i did find that some times the rhymes and lines were a bit shaking, but the over all uniqueness of it covered it up.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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