iight

your intro was a good one it caught my attention and it kept me here, the whole poem was full of pure hard emotion that ate me inside i could see you pouring your heart into this, and feel pain others were feeling.

Holding on takes more than bombing out, why are we afraid of what other people say?

^^ good question, why do we care? why do most of us only remember the rude remarks made towards/about us and not the good hearted comment that some one gave us??

but the part that i adored the most was your very last line, there was no better way than that to end your piece

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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