oh my freaking GOSH I HAVE TO GIVE THIS THE UPMOST RESPECT

my little princess of incest i must decline respectfully
understand i regret my lack of desire especially sexually
^ tha tmade me think you were speakin to a daughter born of incest and that the beauty in her you found so appealing but just extremely sexual
that line gave a gret intro to your peice and i found it to be so beautifuly written


when right now you are eating away at my infinite patience bitch
your not so subtle and sly sentences resemble a simple stitch


^ this shows your frustration with her and how you can overpower her but
it made me think that she still has a grasp on you
perhaps emotionally or phsically?


take a seat in that chair and fill your pretty head with cheer
because all that rage and lust for me will never walk out of here
THAT WAS THE BEST part for sure
because your downing her by her beauty as if sh eis ignorance yet your making it seem that she can never escape from your wrath that she will forever be yours and that you own her


and here on this very bright and sunny september day
i left you in a pool of tears bright and glistening in sunlights play
^
it seems to me liek you really went through this
the way you described those lines
that perhaps *she* is real
but not as you put her into this story
there had to be some insperation
as for the pool of tears it seems that to me that is where she still remains

very beautiful peice THIS was wonderful
hazy