ok, you overdid the vocab, that guy^ doesn't know shit, the flow was a really basic one, some of the wordplay an' meta's were str8, but some shit didn't make any sense and i think was just filler eg:
i'm that tree son, growing my roots so the branches have
second chances after being cut off at thier ranches by
having an opinion in stances this plant is, getting outta
hand-n filled with questions answers are often demanded

i mean you are good, but could be better still... 1

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