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Old 10-01-03, 07:08 PM   #9
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personaly i thought this was ill, for too long have our beautiful females been stepped on by playas/pimps if you will, regardless of who u pimpin and who u playin u still gonna get pimped and played one day, but them gold diggers do tha same thang so its just a question of personality, keep ya head up girl these playas/pimps aint real, even thought they might be pimpin they aint real,u catch my drift, although this piece was ill though, good imagery, real emotion felt, personal things are tha worse things for somebody to spread, trust is hard to give to someone again after shit like that happens, nice vocab,nice wordplay,good rhyme scheme,and structure, i liked tha endin a lot, keep droppin tha hotness.~1~
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