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Old 10-01-03, 08:03 PM   #19
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ok....weak battle....very weak......spits, structure was awful, flow ok, punches were there but didn't hit too hard........wordplay, eh ok........remix, don't use paragraph form, that makes it seem like you're writing an essay. You gotta elevate madly.

I think spits took this with punches, that's bout it, maybe flow too......blah

VOte=spits