who are these guys u dissed???? cuz i really dont like punchlines and all that shit unless the person u dissin is involved...just askin............but as for now..this was....aight....the structure is a bit off for me ...better off broken down cuz they seem a bit long...original cuz neva heard of shit like this except the derailment part...good shit overall though...drop some more shit later ........
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