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Old 10-01-03, 11:44 PM   #4
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hmmm... well i cetainly felt flow coming through...
Nice to see something written that is both coherent and "meaningful"... too many whack mc's in these forums trying to show off their dictionary's skills...

not sure i felt the couplet that ended with "closed" twice....

this could use some tweaking and it will up by itself...

{Peace}
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