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Old 10-02-03, 01:50 AM   #5
Otherwordz
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yeah...I think the beat is a lil' corny...the rhymez were aiiight...but I don't know...there'z somethin' about ya flow that I ain't feelin'...but I can't figure out what it is...try addin' some multie'z it will help out a lot...especially in audio'z...
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