^^yea pretty much

flow was on and off at times
the vocab was there but could have been better
the rhyme scheme could be better, try for more than 1 per rhyme

Not a political debate to which you can relate
You can not lower the mortality rate

my fav line... get up kid

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83050