yo first verse wasn't anything special,but as you said u were a new kat it wasn't too bad,tha second verse however had some nice vocab.good concept,use of afew multies and inter bar ryhmin which isn't always required due to different flow Camarac,and it flowed well,so i'd say from the 2 drops ur already elevatin so keep it up dawg.

"So be it, I come to terms to accept facts/
It's stranger than fiction, Funn spits fire (STEP BACK!)/
There's no delay between my brain an my tounge/
the only dilemma is weed decaying my lungs/
gotta be 'BAD' coz the 'GOOD' die young/
My flow like a killah B, an you just been stung"

^Rhythmic spotted this also.

"I'ma, pump it up, like my blood circulation, away from my heart/
I'ma, disappear in the night, coz you can't see shit in the dark/"

^Solid opener.

Peace