Pine, you really need to work on your flow. You need some wordplay in your punches, and make them more creative. They should also be good/clear enough to where you don't have to explain every one of them.

OLI, you likewise need to work on your flow. You had punches in there, but none hard hitting. Your wordplay was lacking severely. I don't think either of you used multi's. Check out some of the "vets"(doesn't apply to all high posters) on this site. Look at the wordplay they throw in their punches, the multi's they use, the structure of their verses.

Keep battlin and elevate

Vote ~ OLI_DOGG