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Old 10-02-03, 10:54 AM   #5
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Ill slice threw ya `mind` like a `diamond` saw
I`m rhymin raw, ill de~`side` your death like eatin `coleslaw`(get it?)

^Yes, I get it, still doesn't hit too hard though....4/10

you cant `hold ya ground` pound for pound u aint `holdin it down`
ill leave you lookin like ya avatar, outlined in white chalk on the ground

^^bad setup, pretty good punch....7/10

rip this head, blast you, ive `molded` ya style like `statues`
Like `coverin my mouth when I sneeze`, I got mad punches directed `AT'CHU`

^^once again, bad srtup, funny punch, 6/10

like the `Allies` ima destroy ya `axis`, `kick you off the atlas`
Doc Rivers in training camp couldnt help you to work `magic

^best bar in your verse...9/10


Sonned ILLunatic you dead kid why you persist
Cuz I made you cry ya `I`s out till _LLunat_c dont exist!

^^weak finisher....5/10

Overall-31/50

Illunatic-
My Lines Put Mary~Jane Fairly~Insane Cuz I Spit Cleary~In Fame
When I Spit I'm Always In~Game Cuz I Put You In~Pain

^^ok multis...but no punch??.....5/10


I'm Squashin Ya Spit Like Ya Clit On RB.com You Do Not Fit
Who Knows Maybe Ya Lines Are Bit But Ta Me Ya Lines Are Shit

^^lol...nice....9/10

See Girl You Only 18 Gettin Ate Clean Mary~Jane Juss Stick To A-Teens
Ya Got Merked On Ya 8th Scene And Now I'm Knockin Ya Slate Clean

^^not bad...good multis...8/10

You Gettin Ripped Cuz Ya Verse Gettin Flipped And Ya Title Gettin Stripped
Like In Hockey You Gettin Clipped This 18 Year Old Hoe Gettin Pimped

^^lol...not too hard hitting but nice multis and it was funny...7/10

Time Ta Finish You Off Maybe I Should Finish You Soft Like A Cloth
Livin A Short Life Like A Moth Fuck It You Have Been Deliverd Your 2nd Lost

^^horrible.......worst bar of your verse....3/10

overall--32/50


Illunatic barely won this....close battle

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