yo i think that the first piece was alrite it could have been improved......
but the second piece was dope...u had tight vocab...muties and i liked this piece...
been doing research 4 weeks, turns out 2pac wrote em all/ (incredable)
I'm sit here warming up my chair till my titles known regional/ (at least)
dedicate my life to the life of the streets/
Coz, we digest easily in the belly of the beast/
...because of the way that the brackts link the rhymes in a sort of off beat way.....props to ya dawg... keep dropping...
hey yo plz return the favour...

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