hey yo triplicity i think this piece was dope....
your first verse was the best i think....
i think that it kinda depleted towards the end but was still good...
maybe the only way to improve it would be nearer the end to kinda even out the lines......
yo i thought this piece was tight man... keep droppin...
yo plz return the favour..
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