ok im awake now
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Yo Duh Dutteih i'm giving rise to a new form of budding environmentally friendly emcees/
biological lyracists who use the sun to photosynthesise thus allowing people to breathe/
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HAHA, I like that line, very scientific and creative. Its sorta saying the message to encourage other's to send the message. Your vocab is pretty good, but one thing I would say is that your lines are really long and have about 13 to 16 words per line, and its really hard to digest. Unless thats your style and you spit really fast.