wtf? was this, u rhymed all like 20 times in a row
B B B B B B wtf?
arest me arest me?
is your keyboard set on stutt-stutt-stutter
flow was off, please work on that,
your bar structure was like everywhere
need to even up your lines more
umm really wasnt feeling this, i mean come on
u were too repetative and ur style was like bah!!!!
just elivate in every aspect, and next time dont repeat your rhyming word.........................
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