damn you people and your long open mics

aight here we go, the flow was very good...
the topic was kinda played but you put your own twist on it to make it good... the structure was definetly lacking... gotta try to keep your lines around the same syllabul count

fav line was
Call Me A Creator Cuz I'm Moldin This Mic, Controllin This Fight
Burn Trees In Day Later To Night, You Could Say Im' Patrollin Wit Kites

If you would be so kind
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