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Old 10-02-03, 01:31 PM   #11
tRiPliCiTy
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yea this is a bit too short to judge,
like i fell like this is goin somewhere
but 4 lines i dunno i just cant make
anything outta it, flow was on point
but i really cant make much outta 4 lines
it seems alrite, but bah just i dunno
if this is a snippit from some of your work
or if you only wrote 4 lines to this paticular
topic, like your abstractness, style was good.

bah slack reply can realyl make much outta 4 lines .............................................

reutrn the favor pl

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82918
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