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Old 10-02-03, 01:34 PM   #9
Mr.Christensen
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1st...not that its a bad thing it seems you went more for vocab than flow.. the flow wasnt quite off just a little bit.. the rest was good, mulited out!

2nd... aight here the flow was much better, and you stayed with the good vocab, this is better than 1st in my opinion

not much of a challenge, if every puzzle can be solved
and every solid can be dissolved, then mix the solutions

fav line^^

3rd...something my teachers could relate to... i like how you are trying to teach but i think this might have been the worst of the three... i just didnt see it as mixing well with the 1st 2

hook...good use of the wordplay.. nice and to the point

overall... good drop but id see about getting your structure up a notch

if you would be so kind
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