Middle Weight
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IP:
No need to worry Liba, I always vote honest. Here it goes....(I'll do the poll vote after I get over 100 posts)
Hazy B Crazy? Fa Sho She Agreed/
To Battle Me Liba, The Realist Femcee/
^Horrible opener. The opener and closer should always be the strongest part of your verse. It's the first and last impressions you get on your verse....2/10
I Got This Win Wrapped Up Like Presents Under The Tree/
On Christmas Day, You Tickin With A Bomb, Prepare To Be Blown Away/
^Both played concepts...4/10
0-1 Record And You Think You Got Flow? Your A Herb/
I'll Stamp On Your Face Till Your Teeth Go Through The Curb/
^Too simple, and your second line was played out after American History X came out....3/10
Hazy A Crackhead Whore Spat On By Homies/
All The Shit That She Posted Aint Hers, Shes A Phoney/
You gotta start usin wordplay babe. These simple punches aren't gonna win you any battles....4/10
You Chose To Fuck With The Dee? Well More Fool You/
She's Worse Than The Newbies, This Bitch Just Hasn't A Clue/
^Shitty..1/10
About this Game Her Styles Lame, Like A Slut With No Limbs/
Oh Yeah Hazy's Got Arms And Legs..But No Wins/
^First line was kinda bleh...second line was nice...5/10
Your Watsing My Time And The Rest Of RB'S Too/
I'll Have Hazy On One Knee Begging For Votes From You/
^Weak....3/10
Crank Up A Loss On Your Record Of Shame, I'm gone, Feeling Embarrassed Just Speaking Your Name/
^Horrible closer...3/10
I didn't feel that verse at all....little to no wordplay. Flow was choppy and what punches you did have weren't hitting hard at all. You should try and work on that.
Overall....25/80
Standing tall I’m bout to make this statue FALL lady liba dee...deceased by me=
Opener was kinda bleh, definitely stronger than Liba's....4/10
GURL you quote that you love my pieces…when I read your I think if FECES=
Shitty.....2/10
Bitch got BROOKA in her signature—she a straight hooka judging from her AVA picture=
C'mon peeps, I'm waitin for wordplay of some sort. It's not all about flow. No really hard hitting punches in this battle either....4/10
SEE gurl my NAME isn’t CARSON JET and you aint gonna win—ive done won this battle b4 you had the chance to begin=
Eh...5/10
BEAT by the ink of a pen…got you withdrawin like an insufficient amount of HEROINE=
THERE YA GO! At least you're trying to integrate some wordplay here.....6/10
“HAZY HAZY STOP” you said when we met—face it gurl you even a ‘loser’ on the INTERNET=
Bah, back to the weak shit....3/10
copped a feel on me as a rookie…you bout to be baked faster than a TOLLHOUSE cookie=
See, more wordplay, wordplay helps. Played wordplay, but at least you're trying....5/10
you’ve got 2 wins and you think you’re a vet…HOW MUCH STUPIDER CAN THIS BITCH GET?=
Good point, weak punch. Also...it's more stupid :-p....4/10
LIBA undastand it you couldn’t ghost hazy if ya name was Patrick swayze=
Decent punch....7/10
Left this bitch in pieces at the thought of her defeat…double homicide convicted when you put this verse on repeat=
Bad closer...bad, bad closer....4/10
You have some wordplay in your verse. That's good, build on that. Just try not to use played wordplay so much. I mean, I've been gone for over a year and that shit was played back when I was battlin normally. Good rookie battle though....
Overall...44/90
Liba = 31%
Hazy = 49%
Vote ~ Hazy
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