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Old 10-02-03, 03:45 PM   #6
Lethargic
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 828
From: Campbellsville
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No need to worry Liba, I always vote honest. Here it goes....(I'll do the poll vote after I get over 100 posts)

Hazy B Crazy? Fa Sho She Agreed/
To Battle Me Liba, The Realist Femcee/

^Horrible opener. The opener and closer should always be the strongest part of your verse. It's the first and last impressions you get on your verse....2/10

I Got This Win Wrapped Up Like Presents Under The Tree/
On Christmas Day, You Tickin With A Bomb, Prepare To Be Blown Away/

^Both played concepts...4/10

0-1 Record And You Think You Got Flow? Your A Herb/
I'll Stamp On Your Face Till Your Teeth Go Through The Curb/

^Too simple, and your second line was played out after American History X came out....3/10

Hazy A Crackhead Whore Spat On By Homies/
All The Shit That She Posted Aint Hers, Shes A Phoney/

You gotta start usin wordplay babe. These simple punches aren't gonna win you any battles....4/10

You Chose To Fuck With The Dee? Well More Fool You/
She's Worse Than The Newbies, This Bitch Just Hasn't A Clue/

^Shitty..1/10

About this Game Her Styles Lame, Like A Slut With No Limbs/
Oh Yeah Hazy's Got Arms And Legs..But No Wins/

^First line was kinda bleh...second line was nice...5/10

Your Watsing My Time And The Rest Of RB'S Too/
I'll Have Hazy On One Knee Begging For Votes From You/

^Weak....3/10

Crank Up A Loss On Your Record Of Shame, I'm gone, Feeling Embarrassed Just Speaking Your Name/

^Horrible closer...3/10

I didn't feel that verse at all....little to no wordplay. Flow was choppy and what punches you did have weren't hitting hard at all. You should try and work on that.

Overall....25/80


Standing tall I’m bout to make this statue FALL lady liba dee...deceased by me=

Opener was kinda bleh, definitely stronger than Liba's....4/10

GURL you quote that you love my pieces…when I read your I think if FECES=

Shitty.....2/10

Bitch got BROOKA in her signature—she a straight hooka judging from her AVA picture=

C'mon peeps, I'm waitin for wordplay of some sort. It's not all about flow. No really hard hitting punches in this battle either....4/10

SEE gurl my NAME isn’t CARSON JET and you aint gonna win—ive done won this battle b4 you had the chance to begin=

Eh...5/10

BEAT by the ink of a pen…got you withdrawin like an insufficient amount of HEROINE=

THERE YA GO! At least you're trying to integrate some wordplay here.....6/10

“HAZY HAZY STOP” you said when we met—face it gurl you even a ‘loser’ on the INTERNET=

Bah, back to the weak shit....3/10

copped a feel on me as a rookie…you bout to be baked faster than a TOLLHOUSE cookie=

See, more wordplay, wordplay helps. Played wordplay, but at least you're trying....5/10

you’ve got 2 wins and you think you’re a vet…HOW MUCH STUPIDER CAN THIS BITCH GET?=

Good point, weak punch. Also...it's more stupid :-p....4/10

LIBA undastand it you couldn’t ghost hazy if ya name was Patrick swayze=

Decent punch....7/10

Left this bitch in pieces at the thought of her defeat…double homicide convicted when you put this verse on repeat=

Bad closer...bad, bad closer....4/10

You have some wordplay in your verse. That's good, build on that. Just try not to use played wordplay so much. I mean, I've been gone for over a year and that shit was played back when I was battlin normally. Good rookie battle though....
Overall...44/90


Liba = 31%
Hazy = 49%

Vote ~ Hazy