personally dude i think the first verse was fine...

it had flow no matter what others might think... but...

i do agree the seconde verse was much better...

id like to say you remind me of me... and another thing don't take shit from nebody in here that hates on you cuz you don't have over a thousand posts(i know you won't let it bother u anyways) cause being new to this site means absolutely nothing about what level of skills u have...

get better, stay real

{Peace}

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