Thread: 4th Period... Bored... Again....
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Old 10-02-03, 03:56 PM   #5
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yea the overall feel was there...
but B2K over there is right u need some topical insight if all the lines are gonna be about guns...

da flow was off at points.period. However i dig the points where it was on....

i don't think you should bother tweakin this... just start over with a blank page and don't get caught trying to be "gangsta-cute"

{Peace}
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