I really felt King's flow, i got a little repetitive though and near the end the structure loosened... anyway the lines were pretty much bang on throughout the verse...

On the other hand i don't mean to hate but....

WP I could not get into this verse of yours.... I don't see where some of the rhymes came from maybe i need to hear you say it... oh well tighten it up and learn some structure from King and you will get better....

{Peace}

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