iight

i liked the total overlook of this piece, coz although it starts as this im upset coz you used me piece, i love how you stay strong so that when the guy actually comes limping back to you, it doesnt happen that she thinks that he knows better now it wont happen again shit, that you gave it right back to him!!

while i was reading it half way throu the flow and structure changed a bit but when i finished reading it i understood that it changed when the way the poem and emotions did. so that worked. your second line was my fave but i agree the second stanza was the back bone of the piece. nice drop

~Tera~
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