yea i feel ya n my old style was like i didnt care for thinkin about what im gonna put down but now i make the first part ryme wit the last na mean

and i was dissin the cat above me in the cypher called Diss the cat above u haha so it was only a three bar so im gonna improve this style to its max

thanks for the feed back ~1~

if i can could i get more feed back thanks