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Old 10-02-03, 05:44 PM   #6
HazY.B
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.| u bring drama?...i know ur bluffin, take ur shoes off n its ur soul i'm cuttin |.
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nice *sole* play there had a good lil thing going with that opener


.| but i'd still feast on u, ur discolored n deceased like Summer Christmas trees |.
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third christmas tree line ive seen today so i mark it as PLAYEd


.| so I left ur brain on the curb so u can share ur thoughts with the streets |.
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that was your nicest line the BACK BONE to your verse


now to c drama


Some serious ass whoopin when he's spinning 720 degrees//
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IM SICK OF DEGREES LINES there everywhere

At mach 3 speeds flyin like dry leaves in the breeze//
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filler, but nice
Walkin 'round wit bendin knees and jaws shaped like parenthesis//
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good line perhaps your best in my op

This fag got dishragged and dragged like duffel bags on old hags//

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that was nice as well very creative

drag queen line was bad tho
OK
overall i thought bionicle had a great advantage over your lack of word play his SOLE line was more than your whole verse
C however had more vibe flowing through his

there fore vote goes to C drama

ok please pay back the favor and vote on either
hot ice vs me
or libba dee vs hazy
you hate being slept on and so do i
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