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Old 10-02-03, 06:01 PM   #16
sal-v
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hazy took this just with better punches
both were ehhh .. but hazy's was better

hazy your verse was confusing as fuck to read

we dont need the caps, and all the quotations to pick out a punchline .. and if someone does they shouldnt be emceeing ...

vote-hazy

just overall a better verse

elevate..
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