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opener:Pine
structure:both weak~tie
wordplay:Pine
punches:Pine
personals:none really.
finisher:Real
my voteine- he came a lil harder

both of yall need to work on ya structure


aiight

yo will sum 1 plz vote on these plz
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=82876
and
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=82737

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