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Old 10-02-03, 06:10 PM   #7
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Nice piece dog, for real. Stayed on the Starving topic and it flowed well. Up vocab a bit ( dunno how it is seeing as how this the first piece i've read from you) and extend the shit a lil bit more next time. Was still tight tho.

seen kids over weight,how come some kids dont even have money to live

^^ Thas real
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