Thread: LM vs V.A. $lim
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Old 10-02-03, 06:57 PM   #9
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Yo whats the deal with your name/
It matches your rhymes at bein so lame/
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LM seriously have you ever seen anyone win a battle with their ending words being NAME AND LAME? c'mon hun

Coz you can't rap wid me, you dont belong in this game/
Your styles the same as everybody elses, get some individuality/
Then try comin back and verbally attackin me/
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this was getting a little better still simpl eryhming tho
You can't do it so take a rest for a little bit then try and spit/
But you'll find that your still a pile of shit/
Just admit it, your not the brightest candle thats ever been lit/
So dont even bother replyin just make an excuse like your dyin or somethin/
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the center of your verse was proabably your strongest

You can't beat me so there's no point you even tryin/.
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that was a very VERY WEAK ender


VA

yo why the fuck do I invest any of my time
battling this bitch that cant grasp the concept of rhyme
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why you wasted your time? i have no idea!

yo want to compare me to candles when you're runnin ya mouth
thats fine then were candles now I'm blowin ya out
to write one rhyme he sits and ponder for hours
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you have elevated from your last verse i can see that and you will probably beat my ass in our battle the candles line was fairly good

while I throw somethin down quick and you call him devoured
he took 10 so I guess I'll kill him in 8 (lines)
LM ya done. go back to ya love cause we know you L ove to M asturbate
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decent outro WAY better than LM's i can see why he has 2 losses

obviosly VA took this


pay back the favor and vote on hot ice vs hazy

no hate to either of you especially LM i can see that your trying to elevate and that is what is importnat im doing that myself
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