Damn this some nice poetry, i agree with C-Drama and get yourself published, although the concept did tend to flow off after the start
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Sit n silence while I trace my image with my toes in the icy water
i sit on the edge of the river n see my reflection distorted by ripples of hate
i embrace myself at the thought of my past
some of the words that hit me hard spun me in circles so fast
Words of despair...syllables hitting my tear stricken face
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this was sick, and did open a new door to a new level of thinking. who said hip hop was violent?