Like any ball in a salad, ur just gettin "tossed a round"(around)//
Ya dumbfound, downed beneath-the-ground, ya just drowned//

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nice lil ryhme scheme their and teh multi with teh double D's

On the top I stand alone, like a "seed", ur rhymes haven't fully grown//
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nice but ive seen many plays on the same punch

A lyrical disease, my bars are used just to make my opponents suffer//
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if you would have reworded that it could of had double the effect


This was fun, come battle me whenever u want, I can always use an easy win//
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to me an EASY WIN at the ending usually means your gonna lose i dont like it when verses end that way

now on to dan

I destroy your shit, pin point asteroids in orbit, that a hurl ya'll 1000's of miles towards it,god damn heathings, wrap my hands

first off your structure is horrible GOOD PUNCHES but so hard to READ nad FIND and LOCaTE and UNDERSTAND

again,sucker,you think your rhymes sick,i'll leave u lying stiff, i'll put ur corpse in a himelick and brake ur spine bitch,the pain to make your voice change octive,
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creative and decent i liked the pitch flair
from low pitch to high pitch,every hour i kill a hostage.i judge mc's by ther lyrical fitness and punish
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my fave of yours
DaiLList for putting corny stickers on his mixes,you scratch my back i'll scratch yours bitch, i'll eat your swordfish if suck my sausauge

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why would you refer to your *SAUSAGE* when battling another male?
i dont get that

hmmmmmmmmm this is hard to vote on but my vote goes to rebel
he had harder more effective punches DAN if we could find your punches im sure they would be great too

hazy
pay back teh favor and vote on one of mine
much appreciated hazy