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Old 10-02-03, 07:42 PM   #9
da boxa
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From: Pine-Tree
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lol, thats a lil better, 1st thing, you cna swear, and 2nd, you dont rhyme by putting the same thing twice, rhyme a word with something else that sounds like it, make fun of me, explain how your gonna kill me, make fun of my mother, i dont care, just do something. read some other peeps raps and you'll learn.