ER! WRong... what a gay verse lol

let me break it down for you
I pity ur wished sublimity, reppin the commite of merkin infinity/(WHOA)
I pity the "fool", who timidly enters/
and leaves crippled jaws, crippin like Timothy/(south park lol)
^^^Your rookiness shows in your poor use of multis, ending up in a bad first line, timothy punch... it was ok

I relinquish newb delinquiants, leavin um folded up like, paper crinklin/
turbulence shakin ur screen, ma style u cant see, like u just got 2 blinkin/
^^^ more poor usage of multis, what a gay metaphor lol, folded up like paper crinklin.. lmao
the cant see line is played dawg

turb my style will lyrically abort ya, verbally court ya/(like prison bitchass lol)
each line carefully constructed, for meticulous torture/
Actually court is to try to seduce someone, im glad u like me homo but this is a battle board not a matchmaker, more poor usage of multis, lyrically abort ya, verbally court ya... elementary
and your purposely thrusting in big words to elevate to my level, meticulous torture, i know u looked that up in the dictionary lol

im spittin vet neolithic, ur hott shit looks encripted, and ya homo shit seems vindictive/
ima vet take mo time on ur shit it needs liftin/(elevate man plz)
lol me elevate, when ur the one who cant figure out how to fit in multis and use non played punches... once again, trying to insert multis in the wrong places

peep my sickness b4 u go, plungin in, my spit u cant bite, like tryin to devour jin/(this homo bit lines from jin)
oh lord i cracked up at this, first off i nevre bit jin, but thanks for ridin my dick kid
secondly devour is different than byting, but i expect you to say somthing gay like... use your imagination!

Ur dismissed fagit raise ur hand b4 u think to speak//(Bitchery)
next time resemble ur avatar, and duck b4 u catch aprentice heat//
probably your best lines... but ever since i dissed L Prophet with the duck avatar line, its already gtttin played from both of you, lol, but overall... out of 10 ill give this a 3

elevate kid