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Old 10-02-03, 09:43 PM   #11
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turbulence
Your Punches Are Weak, Style Is Bleak, But Your An Obvious Chump/

why did u put "but ure an obvious chump"? its supposed to say "and" dumbass if ure dissin him u cant put "but" and diss him again shit dont make sense

Im Da Type To Spit Hot, My Shits Sick Like a Loogey/
You Da Type Dat Gets No Pussy, And Dry Beats At Da Movies//

that was just really simple too simple even for snoop doggs taste

apprentice
dont explain ure flow so much man cuz then it takes power from it since ure pointing out what us readers are supposed to get on our own na mean?

vocab=apprentice...turb didn show up
flow=turb
wordplay=turb
punches=apprentice good last line
overall=apprentice due to simplicity of turbs verse